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Open Poetry #44

this traceless life

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2009-02-21 09:14 PM

      this traceless life

Beyond the perfect twilight
by a clear moon rising,
an unfettered mind
  and spirit
shall shine with truth
  from within…
sole legacy of
this traceless life.

      --- b. e. adams (2/21/2009)

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2009-02-21 09:24 PM

Profound.

WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

2 posted 2009-02-21 10:08 PM

Yes, this is very profound.

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2009-02-21 10:47 PM

Yo Secondhanddreampoet,

I like this.

I'll take the traceless life anytime--except at the bank.

Bobby

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2009-02-22 02:47 PM

Beautiful poem, Bruce. It shines with truth.
Ida

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

5 posted 2009-02-22 03:17 PM

Understanding the way of nature and all it's subtle lessons brings us closer to that inner peace and you always bring us that. Excellent insight and a wisdom filled write worth the read.

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