Open Poetry #44 |
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They Feel Bones |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania ![]() |
They feel Bones doesn’t have a mind. They feel Bones can’t really understand. They feel Bones just doesn’t think. They feel Bones doesn’t care. They feel Bones can’t really feel pain. They feel Bones can’t be hurt. They feel Bones isn’t very deep. They feel Bones isn’t very smart. They feel Bones won’t tell anyone. They feel Bones has no soul. They feel Bones won’t remember. They feel Bones has no one. They feel Bones won’t hate them. They feel Bones won’t talk. They feel Bones doesn’t write. They feel Bones will do as he’s told. They feel Bones won’t hurt them. They feel Bones. They feel Bones. They feel Bones. Bobby |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Good stuff. I like writing in this format. It's pure. I feel bones. -P Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bobby - I'm in wonderment who 'They' might be. Bones is Bones, good or bad, but still Bones. No one can ever take that away from him... BC |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Bottom line---they "think" they feel Bones, but don't have a clue, whether "they" are shrinks, or people on the streets who are trying to figure him out. Bones is Bones---no questions asked. That's my thought. art |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
it's sad. just really sad ![]() |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
They are definitely wrong about Bones. He sees more than the regular world ever sees. Bones is tough but not hard! Bones demise was purely sad......He may have been forced to be wise beyond his years but he still had a heart. Eric |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Paul, I'm pleased you like this format. Thanks for feeling Bones. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Bill, "They", are Bones villainous clients. They don't care about Bones at all. They only think of themselves. Bones hates them. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Art, What you say is very true. No one ever got to Bones, and that's a fact. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear SEA, Yes, it was very sad. Bones had a bad time of it. There's no excuse for it. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Eric, Yes, the Bones I remember always did have a big heart. He was too generous. Bobby |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
(: -Juju |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Juju, For the lovely smilly face. Love Bobby |
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