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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 I’m willing to admit that I love you but I refuse to disclose to what degree and I’ll never utter never mutter that I need you desperately ~*~ I’m willing to concede that this heart of mine does in fact belong to only you but I am not inclined to ever define Or otherwise divulge That your every want I would gladly indulge ~*~ I’m willing to expose I’m weak- I’m hopeless and softly whisper, yes it’s true I could no more stop the waves in the ocean than stop my heart from loving you ~*~ ~SEA~ |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Lovely. Glad that I just happened to be here when you posted this. So much for slaying SnowQueens in the Kingdom of Loathing. I'll just hang out and wait for more of your poetry. Alison |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I love the partially gaurded but hopelessly in love heart in this piece. Just realy really clever writing! Eric |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hopelessly devoted , this is so special Hope |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Guarded yet totally devoted. It all shows in the in end and in the actions. I particularly liked the ending ... ----------------------------------------------- I could no more stop the waves in the ocean than stop my heart from loving you ----------------------------------------------- Well done. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
grand-fine Romanticism ... superb ending! MUCH (sustained) applause!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - what a great romantic write, yet hidden feelings, and held back caring. You are a great writer of romance. Love the graphic with it, very soft and touching... BC |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
SEA~ You are writing up a storm lately! Love the tug of war between heart and mind in this one. Boy, can I relate. *grin* Indigo |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear SEA, This is a sweet poem with good rhythm. I like it loads. Love Bobby |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
Loved it, Sea... beautiful. "You inspire; I desire – and refrain; you sustain." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh Susan, this is just beautiful. I always preferred to at least keep one card out of my deck too.  |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very very much for the reads and replies  yes, I give more than I hold back always, but I do keep a little for me. Again, thank you!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A new love poem by you, dear Sue, was highly overdue, I would say. And here you are with a most beautiful and inspired work, that flows gracefully down the page. Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just gorgeous! He's a lucky man! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Susan...This has got to be your best and most touching writes. A  for sure...Paul~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
I just loved this SEA, thanks for the sharing my friend and the talent you show. Rick |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Sue that is such a sweet tender post, quite touching really. so much enjoyed. love. Lindsay |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you guys are the best! thank you so much for your wonderful replies, they mean a lot to me.  |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Sue, This is the best yet. I understand where you are coming from. The picture is also beautiful.. I can see you there looking out with wonderment in you eyes, and love in your heart. You are a very special woman, and very tallented. Love always, Tracey |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
SEA, this is a beautiful poem, and the last three lines are a jewel Mark |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Great work sea. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Lovely Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you guys are so awesome thank you so much for your sweet replies, they make my day!  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
to the core. You keep my secrets and I will keep yours.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Susan, I LOVE your romantic poems. They always touch my heart and seem to apply to my feelings, also. So good to read you again. Hugs, Ethel Ethels Love Poetry My SpiritIsUp Poetry Shelf Powered by CGISpy.com |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you ladies very much! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I've been away a while, but it's always so nice to see your name and read your songs...simply lovely Lee J. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Do you remember, in those days long gone, when you whispered, do you think I can? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Now you went and did it...James |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
such a wonderful ending... "I could no more stop the waves in the ocean than stop my heart from loving you" ...this kind of love is a beautiful gift--handle with care... |
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