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With chaos there is no theory
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With chaos there is no theory |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india 
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With Chaos There is no theory =============================== A fistful of anarchy enters in his dome of silence; the silences interchange the data, the identity of them. How pleased he always becomes when chaos swaps recognized words! He yields to the imminent lost; makes himself amused with chaos, a stranger, a gush of whimsy, a tangy departure from days. : Will you have a glass of sherry? Chaos, tell me wherefrom you are coming! : Walked over an arid land a widow of war; I have brought a sack of earth from there for you. I shall spread it over here, in your room… He watches his room grows awry with dry thirst and prodigal wind. Anarchy =© 2009 - All Rights Reserved Kushal Poddar clever talks delay friendship! |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
intrigued by your thoughts...excellent! RV |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
It is good, sometimes, to let one's mind and heart run free, as long as one picks up the pieces and puts them back into place after one is rested. Smiles, Kushal. I enjoyed your artistic excellence, as usual. Owl |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very interesting piece. "How pleased he always becomes when chaos swaps recognized words!" The earthy scent of 'a sack of earth' in the room fits the scene perfectly! |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
You never fail to impress. -P Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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ramisf Member
since 2007-05-17
Posts 93 |
i like what you wrote; if you rhyme your verse you will end up having a perfect outcome |
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