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Open Poetry #44
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SlowlyFallAway
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since 2008-08-29
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North Carolina
0 posted 2009-05-29 05:04 PM

Not a single word could advance placement towards you
Current situations casting shadows on future initiations
Now we’re surrounded by a crowd full of faults
Throwing lies like knives and makeup kisses smeared with fists
Solo becomes the temptress of attractive
And still we lie, trapped in our own solitary internment
Without the slightest hint of who possesses the peccadillo

Emily Shives
5-29-09 Friday
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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2009-05-29 05:15 PM

SlowlyFallAway - I could be wrong but I sense many underlying emotions in this writing. If so, you wrote of them well...

BC
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