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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
The children sit alone silenced and repressed Too brainwashed to recognize the symptoms of distress This society has its offspring trained To all conform and be the same Soon enough it will cause worldwide unrest The intellectuals and experts Look for things to blame What they don't realize is the cause of problems has no name Its everything and everyone Society's trap has been sprung Point your finger at the scapegoat, It will always be the same Look at what the worlds doing to us Causing apathy, misery and distrust Go to a doctod, get some pills Go to therapy, pay their bills We are victim's of America's greedy lust They are killing us, Slowly devouring our very souls When we're out in the world, We act as though we're in control We're losing grip, there's no doubt As the TV sucks our energy out And our hearts are morphed into void black holes |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
I love the images and messages behind your poems, but they need some work with rhyme. Just my opinion. Thanks |
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