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Teen Poetry #1

You'll Always Love me?

Tanya
Junior Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA

0 posted 1999-09-08 11:29 PM

i think u love me
i love u too
but is ur love
really true?
if u will just
hold my hand
does it mean
youll understand?
i wanna be
with u a lot
but have u given
all u've got?
u understand me?
r u for real?
cuz i am telling u
what i feel
youll always love me?
u think u will?
it is true
our love is real?
i really hope so
i mean that too
i really hope
our love is true

Tanya
Junior Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA

1 posted 1999-09-10 10:49 PM

can u guys please give some replays i wanna know what u think
thanx

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

2 posted 1999-09-11 12:03 PM

I think that ur poem is REALLY nice.
If u think u actually LOVE this guy, than he has to show his love back 2 u. If he doesnt, than ur wasting ur time. Tell me how things work out between u 2 ok

Tanya
Junior Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA

3 posted 1999-09-12 12:12 PM

everythings going pretty well except i dont really LOVE him yet

SWEETLADIE
Junior Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 11
BRONX,NEW YORK,UNITED STATES

4 posted 1999-09-15 11:18 AM

GREAT POEM

NaTaLy
Junior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 43
brooklyn,ny,usa

5 posted 1999-09-15 02:19 PM

I THINK YOUR POEM IS NICE,BUT NOTHING IS EVER FOR SURE.SO HANG IN THERE.~

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n.m.

Tanya
Junior Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA

6 posted 1999-09-16 12:05 PM

THANX

nicnac8
Junior Member

since 1999-07-28

Posts 46
New York, N.Y. USA

7 posted 1999-09-17 12:35 PM

pretty good. Keep Up the good work!

Tanya
Junior Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA

8 posted 1999-09-18 01:06 AM

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