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Teen Poetry #1

Tick... Tock...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-09-17 12:03 PM

Time is racing with the night
Tick by tick
Shades and shadows conquer light
Tack by tack

And my pen will never rest
Tick by tick
Broken heart beats in my chest
Tack by tack

Everything begins to change
Tick by tick
Night is acting on the stage
Tack by tack

I’m becoming sore and weak
Tick by tick
The sky is turning dim and black
Tack by tack

I fall asleep upon my back
Tick by tick
And my dreams seem so unique
Tack by tack

Now I do not hear the clock
Tick and tack

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I fell in love and kept on falling

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-09-17 05:30 PM

I really liked that poem, honestly, your the only person that ive read poetry by in this category that shows an IQ over 3.....

"Only stupid people are breeding"
-Harvey Danger-

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

2 posted 1999-09-17 09:56 PM

I guess I'm around a 4... LOL. Thanks I agree with you not many here know how to write too good. I've enjoyed your work also.

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