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since 1999-06-25
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0 posted 1999-06-25 08:26 PM

Love like a wildfire blazed through my heart
Not the first time we met but the first time we were apart
I didn't know what I was missing
I didn't know you really cared
I had been hurt so much all I could feel was scared
I wanted to hold you and tell the world you were mine
But by the time I was ready I had run out of time
I wish you were still with me
To cherish love and hold
But all that I am left with is heart that has turned cold

Love: "Two souls with but a single thought, two hearts that beat as one."

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since 1999-06-26
Posts 35
american falls, idaho usa
1 posted 1999-06-28 08:24 PM

I love it. It's complete sadness and desolate making me want to tell the person i love that i do love them because like the saying don't know what you've got until it's gone. beautiful imagery. keep writing!!

~ Alysia*

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since 1999-06-22
Posts 40
Rohill, NJ, USA
2 posted 1999-06-28 10:47 PM

I liked that a lot!!! it's a feeling i know that I can realte to
Junior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 17
3 posted 1999-06-30 11:56 PM

Oh my. Those words summed up how I feel. Very good poem. It's soo relatable, even words can't explain. Please keep up the good work and I hope to see more from you.

*OoOoAudrey AuoOoO*
"Music is my life,without it, I would not be alive."

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