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oasis1352 New Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 5littleton,CO,USA |
Love like a wildfire blazed through my heart Not the first time we met but the first time we were apart I didn't know what I was missing I didn't know you really cared I had been hurt so much all I could feel was scared I wanted to hold you and tell the world you were mine But by the time I was ready I had run out of time I wish you were still with me To cherish love and hold But all that I am left with is heart that has turned cold ------------------ Love: "Two souls with but a single thought, two hearts that beat as one." |
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Alysia Junior Member
since 1999-06-26
Posts 35american falls, idaho usa |
I love it. It's complete sadness and desolate making me want to tell the person i love that i do love them because like the saying goes...you don't know what you've got until it's gone. beautiful imagery. keep writing!! ------------------ ~ Alysia* |
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Aprender Junior Member
since 1999-06-22
Posts 40Rohill, NJ, USA |
I liked that a lot!!! it's a feeling i know that I can realte to |
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Whau2251 Junior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 17Hanford,California,U.S.A. |
Oh my. Those words summed up how I feel. Very good poem. It's soo relatable, even words can't explain. Please keep up the good work and I hope to see more from you. ------------------ *OoOoAudrey AuoOoO* "Music is my life,without it, I would not be alive." |
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