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Babygirl
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since 1999-09-12
Posts 3


0 posted 1999-09-12 08:28 PM


Did you ever love someone
But knew they didn't care ?
Did you ever feel like crying
But knew you'd get know where?
Did you ever close your eyes
and say a lttle prayer ?
Did you ever look in to their heart
and wish you were their ?
Did you ever watch them walk by
not wanting them to go
and wisper "GOD I LOVE YOU"
and ever let then know ?
You cry all night in misery
and almost go insane
Their is nothing in this world
that would cause so much pain
If I could choose between life
and death
I think I would rather die
Love is fun but it hurts
so much
The price you pay is high
And so I say to you my friend
do not fall in love
You get hurt before it is through
You see my friend
I ought to know
because I fell in love
With you !!

© Copyright 1999 Babygirl - All Rights Reserved
Star Fairy 2
Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
1 posted 1999-09-13 09:38 PM


very powerful.
Tanya
Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA
2 posted 1999-09-14 12:47 PM


O my god that is sooo sweet and sad. it almost made me cry. its one of the nicest poems i heard in very long. If u really r in this situation let him know u Love him if he loves u back it will work for the best. And never give up!
<333Tanya<333

THE BIG DUMB WHITE GUY
New Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 9
BROWNSVILLE, TEXAS,UNITED STATES
3 posted 1999-09-15 05:57 PM


BELIVE ME HE KNOWS U LOVE HIM
AND YA KNOW WHAT??? HE LOVES U TO, I GARENTEE!!

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