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Aprender
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since 1999-06-22
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Rohill, NJ, USA

0 posted 1999-09-10 05:48 PM


I had to take a chance
No more bottled feeling, only the truth showsnow
What's the worst that can happen?
You can't lose soemthing you never had
So I let it all out, well enough for the time being
And now I have to wait...
We all spend time searching for that someone
And it's a shame if you've found that person, but they don't feel the same way
But you never know unless you take a channce
A chance on love

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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
1 posted 1999-09-10 09:13 PM


Taking that chance is one of the scariest things...trust me, I know. But you have to do it. Exellent work, Aprender!

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller


Taeira
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 26

2 posted 1999-09-17 12:12 PM


AWW thats gorgeous...it's exacty how i felt..only i didnt take the chance...the signs were all there but i was waiting for soemthing more definate..and now its too late ..so yeh..i advise everyone else to take the chance

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~live life like there's no tomorrow, because regret is the ultimate punishment~

Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
3 posted 1999-09-18 06:53 PM


I was in hell.......I took that chance.....i had everythiong to lose, the air i breathe, the blood in my veins, but i took that chance.....and here i am....im still in hell, but im in love.....

"I love you for what I am not
I do not want what I have got
A blanket acned with ciggarette burns
Second rate third degree burns."
-Kurt Cobain-

Taeira
Junior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 26

4 posted 1999-09-19 09:34 AM


yeh isn't it strange how what is supposed to be the greatest feeling in the world..can bring on some of the worst feelings?
It sucks.
but at least you had the guts to take the chance...even if it didnt turn out the best i'm sure you'd be feeling worse if you didn't take the chance and u were left wondering 'what if?' forever!
At least now you can TRY to move on and realise that this all happened for a reason .
or maybe i miss understood what u said and it did turn out good??
I hope it did...then at least someones did!
coz mine sure didnt!

byebye

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~live life like there's no tomorrow, because regret is the ultimate punishment~

Aprender
Junior Member
since 1999-06-22
Posts 40
Rohill, NJ, USA
5 posted 1999-09-19 08:18 PM


for everyone's info..it didn't work out, haha! But it's ok, I'm movin on!
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