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Teen Poetry #1

Forgive me Love...

Master
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since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-09-19 01:41 PM

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"Forgive me love for this disgrace
The love I feel is just unheard of
The way I love makes lovers sort of
Appear as lacking love and taste"
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Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

1 posted 1999-09-19 02:38 PM

any1?

Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

2 posted 1999-09-19 02:42 PM

I can't really think of a fitting compliment......i always feel so self righteous when telling other poeple about their poetry...but I liked it

Master
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since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

3 posted 1999-09-19 08:18 PM

Thanks, I'm the same way when judging someone elses' work.

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