I gave you a chance( i really would like 2 hear ur coments on this 1)

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I gave you a chance( i really would like 2 hear ur coments on this 1)

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

0 posted 1999-09-07 11:41 PM

I let you into my life.
I gave you a chance.
I didn't know anything in advance.

The first time things didn't go well.
You must understand,
That was how I felt.

Then I find out, sum thins bout you,
Turns out wut you said to me wasn't true.

Now you come to me,
Asking to forgive and take you back.
Why can't you just lemme live,
Whithout making my world black?

I usually give guys just 1 chance.
I cannot give anotha 1,
Just because of you puppy glance.

I understand that you're hurting.
But you hurt me too.
I didn't mean to hurt you,
Beleive me wut I say is true.

But I did give you that chance.
And you just threw it away.
Maybe if you make me beleive
That you deserve anotha chance,
I'll let you come back and stay.

But I ask you now,
Before I fall for you again.
Don't hurt me like that,
And cause me all this pain!!!
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I really would like to know wut u ppl think about this 1

Raspberme
Junior Member

since 1999-09-04

Posts 21
South Hill, WA, USA

1 posted 1999-09-08 09:54 AM

I think it waz really good, i don't think that this guy deserves another chance cuz when u gave him a 2nd chance he didn't want it. so if he wants u, than let him show u. latz!

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"A fine guy can open your eyes, a smart guy can open your mind, but a sweet guy can open your heart" ~Raspberme

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

2 posted 1999-09-08 10:29 PM

thanx, i really like ur quote

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Tanya
Junior Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA

3 posted 1999-09-08 11:35 PM

its very nice and if ur poem is a true story then if u really like him and u have a feeling he wont hurt u again give him the chance.But if u dont feel that way dont.
<333Tanya<333

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

4 posted 1999-09-10 07:27 PM

thanx

TrulY PreciouS
Junior Member

since 1999-09-06

Posts 20

5 posted 1999-09-11 11:19 PM

A very good poem!!! If this is a true experience, then I suggest to forget about him. Your true love would not do that to you. There are so many other guys in this world destined to be with you. So don't you forget that... just a lil advice from meeh.

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Trul¥ Preciou§

"Live and Learn! Forgive and Forget! Take advantage in life coz life is short and it's only once in a lifetime!"

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

6 posted 1999-09-16 07:16 PM

You're right, thanx

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