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Teen Poetry #1

loosing a loved one

NaTaLy
Junior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 43
brooklyn,ny,usa

0 posted 1999-09-15 02:16 PM

her life was never meant to be.
blown away before she reached twenty three.
i stood there and watched,
as they tore her apart,
i couldnt cry,
just stand there and watch.
they stole my tears as well as my love.
they took her away from me.
and all i could do was stand there,
frozen,frozen in my step.

and now as i lye here in my bed under the covers i shudder as the memmories return.
but only i know the truth.
and all i could do is stand there frozen in my step.
never to say another word again.

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n.m.

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

1 posted 1999-09-16 07:21 PM

I really liked ur poem

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