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Teen Poetry #1

My love

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-08-31 11:59 PM

The pale sun peels off the weak, worn-out rays
The earth stands naked waiting for the night
Afraid of light, Love rarely shows her face
But when she does, her face is full of pride
The city drowns in the abyss of her eyes
The clocks stand breathless from the bliss
The planet shrinks substantially in size
Conceited gods fall down to her knees
They yearn to have her sit beside them
They offer her fresh bread and wine
They strive to have her grow inside them
I’m glad to know that she’s just mine

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I fell in love and kept on falling

PhaerieChild
Senior Member

since 1999-08-30

Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon

1 posted 1999-09-01 12:24 PM

This is extremely beautiful in a haunting sort of way.

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Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

2 posted 1999-09-01 01:31 PM

Thanks for responding! What do you mean by haunting?

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