Teen Poetry #1 |
I thought I was over you ! ! |
Black Rain Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 60California, USA |
I thought I was over you, I guess I thought wrong. Everything was going good, Better than I thought it would. Then you had to come along with your sweet smile, I never realized how much I missed your style. You asked me how I was doing and gave me a big hug, I stood there surprised and answered with a shrug. Life was easier when you said you didn't care, Now I'm a wreck, life isn't fair. You've hurt me so many times before, and the sad thing is I'll let you do it more. ------------------ "I'm just a girl...standing in front of a boy...asking him to love her." - Notting Hill |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Very true. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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NaTaLy Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 43brooklyn,ny,usa |
its hard getting out of a bad relationship. i used to be in an unfair relationship like that and i always came back for more till i smarted up.its hard but you can do it~ |
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mister61 Junior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 41bergen county, nj |
Very well done - not much consolation for the pain, I know, but your talent might help you deal with it. |
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Nici Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 22Hastings, New Zealand |
I know what you mean. I'm in a situation like that at the moment. No matter how much we seem to get hurt we always let it happen again - its habit. What can I say...we learn from our mistakes and move on EVENTUALLY!!! Good poem! |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
Black Rain, I don't know how old you are but in time you will find out that the truth of love is this: after finding the inner strength to let a bad relationship go, it is easier to find a good loving relationship. One must develop an emotional fortitude to take it or leave it. |
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The Mike Sacks Member
since 1999-08-29
Posts 129brooklyn ny |
WoW,i know the way u feel |
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Maitay Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 158Sisters,OR,USA |
I am just getting out a a situation like that. I know that it will hurt, but it will hurt more to keep holding on. I wish you the best of luck for everyone going through this. It's great that you recognize whats going on. Keep up the good writing.... ------------------ ~depression is not a sickness of the body or mind, but of the heart. When the heart feels alone and afraid~ Maitay Mirabel Litton |
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