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Always & Forever...... |
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peachluvz New Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1eugene, oregon, usa |
You broke my heart in two Now i don't know what to do You said you loved me but it was just a lie How could this happen i don't know why Now my life has fallen apart I'll always love you but you stoll my heart You ripped it up & smashed it into the ground But i should have relised you didn't want me around, Our relationship was perfect at first But then it changed for the worst I want you to know i'll love you forver But you found a way to break my heart, why are you so cleaver, I'll be your friend till the day i die But you hurt me i'll never know why There might be a chance for us in the future for us to get back together But my heart will belong to you always and forever! [This message has been edited by peachluvz (edited 08-18-99).] |
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Former DeadPoet Junior Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 16 |
Your poem I like, has to do with personal experience. Just proof read it. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Yes, nicely done! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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