Teen Poetry #1 |
L.O.V.E. (Liking Others Very Easily) |
Aprender Junior Member
since 1999-06-22
Posts 40Rohill, NJ, USA |
Like anyone, I'm happy for people in love But when you have a new L.O.V.E. everyday, it's not real Once or twice at such an early age is normal When you start to overuse it, it loses it's meaning When you throw it around, it's L.O.V.E., not love Take a heavy word too lightly Love means the world, love means everything Love has to be taken more seriously Used for the rarest of people To me, L.O.V.E. has no meaning Just a simile for like To me, love means the world |
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invertigo18 Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 53Prairieville, LA., USA |
Very insightful. I can relate to it very much. ------------------ Luke Cakalic |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
i agree with the message in this poem, Aprender...hey, this is the country where people say "oh, i love that outfit!" PS: have you been to "The Alley" yet to cast your vote for "on a roll" ? [This message has been edited by elvira (edited 08-18-99).] |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wonderful work, Aprender. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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