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Aprender
Junior Member
since 1999-06-22
Posts 40
Rohill, NJ, USA

0 posted 1999-06-23 12:44 PM


Like anyone, I'm happy for people in love
But when you have a new L.O.V.E. everyday, it's not real
Once or twice at such an early age is normal
When you start to overuse it, it loses it's meaning
When you throw it around, it's L.O.V.E., not love
Take a heavy word too lightly
Love means the world, love means everything
Love has to be taken more seriously
Used for the rarest of people
To me, L.O.V.E. has no meaning
Just a simile for like
To me, love means the world

© Copyright 1999 Aprender - All Rights Reserved
invertigo18
Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 53
Prairieville, LA., USA
1 posted 1999-06-23 01:18 PM


Very insightful. I can relate to it very much.

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Luke Cakalic

elvira
Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
2 posted 1999-08-18 04:37 AM


i agree with the message in this poem, Aprender...hey, this is the country where people say "oh, i love that outfit!"

PS: have you been to "The Alley" yet to cast your vote for "on a roll" ?

[This message has been edited by elvira (edited 08-18-99).]

Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
3 posted 1999-08-31 02:22 AM


Wonderful work, Aprender.

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller



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