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My Suicide |
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Misty Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121USA |
I was about to take "the plunge". It was a question to shoot or be hung. As a 14 year old girl, I was sick of my life, sick of the world. My mind was all jumbled. There's nothing to live for I mumbled. Just then the phone rang. The gun was aimed and about to bang. But after the 4th ring I answered it. It was my best friend on the other end. We talked and she told me that I'd be missed. So I decided this wasn't going to be it! My life wasn't at it's end! Someone did care and I thank heaven for my friend. For if she hadn't cared I might not be here. ------------------ ©Misty |
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Black Rain Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 60California, USA |
sooooo sad! I can relate with a similar problem i've had,,,,,your poem makes me think of how good life is. keep up the great work. and keep posting poems so i can read them!  Black rain ------------------ "I'm just a girl...stnding in front of a boy...asking him to love her." - Notting Hill |
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Misty Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121USA |
Thanks for replying on my poem it mean a great deal that someone apreciates my poems! ------------------ ©Misty |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very powerful..I can relate. Excellent piece, Misty. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks |
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Misty Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121USA |
Thanks you two for reading and commenting about this poems. I didn't think people actual read and liked my poems. But now I know someone appreciates me! Thanks alot! ------------------ ©Misty |
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Slim Shady Junior Member
since 1999-08-03
Posts 32Phoenix, AZ, USA |
Very well written. I think you should work on making it a little longer, give as a little more of that talent  Keep up the good work!------------------ "That's Rock Bottom When this life makes you mad enough to kill... That's Rock Bottom When you want something bad enough you'll steal... That's Rock Bottom When you feel you have had it up to here Cause you mad enough to scream but you sad enough to tear" Words by the Slim Shady |
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Misty Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121USA |
Thanks for the advice, i'll do that! ------------------ ©Misty |
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Jenn New Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 8Clay,New York United States |
I love your poem. It made me think of the time i talked my friend out of suicide. and it makes me think that there are people in this world that you can always depend on. Great work keep it up. @------{------ Jenn |
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