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Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

0 posted 1999-07-31 04:35 PM

you looked at me and smiled every time
but i was to bleek to notice
now u tell me u always liked me
u say i should have realised
but its to late,i should have
i could have
buti wouldnt have done anything
sooner.
I hurt you,but i was to scared to notice
I love you,and im to scared to tell u
wat should i do now???
its to late
I need you,but im to scared to feel this way about anyone
So i hope u can help me

Dont be to scared...jus end my suffering...pull this!!,slash this!!,Choke this!!,End this!!
Now!!!!
Please...
if u cant see my silent dry tears i know u can feel them

Love mike

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I'm not a poet!!,E.A.Poe was a poet.
I'm jus a person who likes to show off his writnig to ppl...but i can never call my slef a poet...its a dream not reality

Mike1Sacks@aol.com

Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

1 posted 1999-07-31 07:47 PM

IM INSUTLED NO1 RESPONDED

Tanya
Junior Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA

2 posted 1999-07-31 11:07 PM

I THINK ITS NICE BUT SAD. HONESTLY I L ACTUALLY LIKED 1 OF YOUR OTHER POEMS BETTER BUT THIS IS GOOD ALSO.
<333TANYA<333

Black Rain
Member

since 1999-07-19

Posts 60
California, USA

3 posted 1999-07-31 11:38 PM

No this poem was Really good. I can relate to every one of your poems, you are a great writer, keep up the good work.
black rain

Veronna
New Member

since 1999-07-30

Posts 2
Brooklyn, NY, USA

4 posted 1999-07-31 11:47 PM

I think you ARE a poet. and dont say that.
I could relate to how the person you were talkin about in ur poem feels. I have bin through that same thing as her MANY MANY times. All i think you should do is tell her the truth dont worry.

Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

5 posted 1999-08-01 04:46 AM

thank u all

------------------
I'm not a poet!!,E.A.Poe was a poet.
I'm jus a person who likes to show off his writnig to ppl...but i can never call my slef a poet...its a dream not reality

Mike1Sacks@aol.com

Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

6 posted 1999-08-02 08:33 PM

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Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

7 posted 1999-08-06 04:21 PM

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Starr_Scott
Junior Member

since 1999-08-06

Posts 26
Brownwood, Texas, USA

8 posted 1999-08-06 05:03 PM

No i'm against it. YOUR A GREAT WRITTER SO STOP SAYING YOUR NOT! You already showed your work and your getting great feedback so eat it up and take the comments because their true. This poem is awesome! The only thing i can say is you better go for it because if you don't she'll get sick of waiting around and you'll be reaching out for her but she won't be comin back. Believe me i'm in the same situation and i'm getting sick of waiting for the guy to tell me how he feels.
GO FOR IT!

Starr

doritos
Junior Member

since 1999-07-31

Posts 21

9 posted 1999-08-07 05:34 AM

I'm not a poet!!,E.A.Poe was a poet.
I'm jus a person who likes to show off his writnig to ppl...but i can never call my slef a poet...its a dream not reality

Mike1Sacks@aol.com

You said that and other people didn't think so but since you don't believe them...

~ Make it a REALITY! ~

Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

10 posted 1999-08-11 04:54 AM

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