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Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

0 posted 1999-07-29 07:37 PM

right now im tryin a new style,one where my g/f wrties to me and i respond...this is not a real convo i made it up for this poem
Aol conversation

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My G: im soooo dead tired
My G: i missed u 2
Mike1Sacks: i missed u so much
My G: wad u do w/o me?
Mike1Sacks: i cryed of bordum,ifelt a loss...something that was not filled till u got onlin now
My G: aww
Mike1Sacks: i didnt realised hopw much u meant to me till i had a couple of days without hearin ur voice...where i called ur voice mail every night jus to hear u say ur name
My G: my voice sux but ok
Mike1Sacks: ppl said im crazy for missing u as much as i did,since we werent even together for to long
Mike1Sacks: but i know inside of me they are wrong
My G: who thinx that?
Mike1Sacks: every1 who knows me well enough

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I'm not a poet!!,E.A.Poe was a poet.
I'm jus a person who likes to show off his writnig to ppl...but i can never call my slef a poet...its a dream not reality

Mike1Sacks@aol.com

Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

1 posted 1999-07-30 01:36 PM

thanxthanx

Gedanken
Junior Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 16
New york

2 posted 1999-07-30 04:56 PM

intersting new style, could work

check these out maybe inspirational for new ideas

---http://members.xoom.com/weeklyhoppy

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I say to all who listens, we'll never win!!

*~*butterfly*~*
Junior Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 28
minnesota

3 posted 1999-07-31 12:36 PM

not bad, very creative!!

*later*
~kas~

Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

4 posted 1999-08-02 08:36 PM

???

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

5 posted 1999-08-02 08:44 PM

Mike that was very sweet. I loved that. Its a new style, which is nice. I hope that things between u and ur G work out 4 best.

Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

6 posted 1999-08-06 04:20 PM

1

Starr_Scott
Junior Member

since 1999-08-06

Posts 26
Brownwood, Texas, USA

7 posted 1999-08-06 05:06 PM

Good new style, but don't give up on the poetry.
STARR

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Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

8 posted 1999-08-11 04:54 AM

sex?

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