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Teen Poetry #1

My Love

littleredwriter
New Member

since 1999-08-03

Posts 3
Portland, TN usa

0 posted 1999-08-03 09:16 PM

Will I ever in my life find someone to love?
I've had many boys,
And put them on a pedastal, (pedastall)
Though none of them pass my test,
to find the one in all.
Maybe i should change,
then maybe my luck will change.
I'm not all beutiful,bred, or blonde,
and so my one love is lost way beyond,
And so ends my poem about pain,love,and sorrow.
Guess I'll wait alone tonight...
And wait alone tomorrow.

So whatcha' think?

Slim Shady
Junior Member

since 1999-08-03

Posts 32
Phoenix, AZ, USA

1 posted 1999-08-03 09:23 PM

Nice poem. I especially like the last 5 lines.

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"That's Rock Bottom
When this life makes you mad enough to kill...
That's Rock Bottom
When you want something bad enough you'll steal...
That's Rock Bottom
When you feel you have had it up to here
Cause you mad enough to scream but you sad enough to tear"

Words by the Slim Shady

graham
Member

since 1999-07-31

Posts 60
South Yorkshire, England

2 posted 1999-08-11 10:12 AM

Have you ever lost something?
Then just when you give up looking,
it finds you?

Nice poetry Littlered.... :-)

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I always wanted an edible canoe
but you can't have your kayak and eat it too!

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