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Teen Poetry #1

Starlight

Raven
Member

since 1999-06-14

Posts 67
Hopewell Jct, New York, USA

0 posted 1999-06-21 04:54 PM

Is that you gazing at the stars?
In awe of the beauty of the night?
The moon, so pale and bloodless
Is a vampire that roams in the dark.
Kneeling on your lawn, mesmerized
Do you ever feel that the stars are stealing you away?
I can feel them grasping my soul
Wishing I was somewhere else.
Make a wish, don't be afraid
If it comes true then you will know
That when the day of your death comes
You will forever grace the night sky.

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"They sing the stories of the present, of people trapped in a shadow world" ~Charlotte Seley~

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-06-21 09:42 PM

Very pretty..I like it!

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*Krista Knutson*

Dusk Treader

Moderator

Senior Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 1187
St. Paul, MN

2 posted 1999-06-22 02:06 AM

Good poem, I enjoyed it greatly. I love the metaphor.

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*Dusk Treader* pacing the path between dark and light.

katrina
Junior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 41
White Bear Lake, Minnesota, U.S.A

3 posted 1999-06-22 11:19 PM

I really like how you describe things in this poem. It is really great. nice poem! :0)

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