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Teen Poetry #1

Imprints

katrina
Junior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 41
White Bear Lake, Minnesota, U.S.A

0 posted 1999-06-21 12:38 PM

Imprints
Leaves in the autumn
Falling off the trees
Silently touching the ground
Leaving imprints on the soil
To never be forgotten.

We will always be remembered
As imprinting people’s lives
And touching hearts
If we too
Can sometimes fall down,
Get away from what we are used to
And touch someone different
Some one new;
A different surface
And let our lives imprint there's
And make a difference
Copying the leaves
And imprinting hearts.

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Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-07-09 05:28 PM

Very touching, katrina.

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*Krista Knutson*

Delilah
Junior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 36
The Wonderful America

2 posted 1999-07-10 01:06 AM

I think you have the right idea. Go deeper. You're still on the surface.

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Delilah
:)
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"I think, therefore I am."
-Rene Descartes

Kelly
Member

since 1999-07-03

Posts 145

3 posted 1999-07-11 01:26 PM

Thank you I love this poem. It really made me think about the imprints loved ones have left on my life. Those who have passed away but can never be forgotten because of the imprints they have left on my heart. Thank you again.

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