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Joshua
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since 1999-07-08
Posts 43
phoenix,az,usa

0 posted 1999-07-10 11:27 AM


I must admit that i could not comit
I must admit it was hard to lie
I must admit the need to die.

The guilt is mine
I was untrue
The question is what am i to do
Make amends for whats been done
'Cause i beleive that she's the one...

© Copyright 1999 Joshua - All Rights Reserved
Seeking77
Junior Member
since 1999-07-09
Posts 24
Irvine california
1 posted 1999-07-10 10:00 PM


short but sweet..I loved this one. tahnk you!

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JeNn AnNe >:)

Joshua
Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 43
phoenix,az,usa
2 posted 1999-07-10 11:07 PM


that means so much to me...

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"Poetry is an orphan of scilence. The words never quite equal the experiece behind them." *Charles Simic

"The poet is the priest of the invisable." *Wallace Stevens*


Kelly
Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 145

3 posted 1999-07-11 01:00 PM


Guilt is a very strong emotion. One I find hard to deal with. Very good poem. I'm looking forward to reading more.

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