Teen Poetry #1 |
Going Crazy |
Robert Junior Member
since 1999-07-09
Posts 20sunrise,fl,usa |
Dreaming all through my head my head is caving in YOU'VE GOT ME GOING CRAZY GOING CRAZY GOING CRAZY LIKE A STAR WE ALL FALL EVIL MIND? I MIGHT LIKE IT I CAN TAKE THE PAIN BUT IT PULLS ME IN YOU KNOW I'M THE LEADER OF ALL MY SIN BUT, I CONTROL ME. DO YOU CONTROL ME? YOU CAN'T TELL ME WHAT TO DO (I DO IT ANYWAY) I JUST FOLLOWED YOU, THROUGH AND THROUGH BUT, YOU'LL NEVER TAKE ME DOWN AGAIN YOU'LL NEVER TAKE ME DOWN. CAUSE I DON'T EVER WANT TO FEEL THAT WAY AGAIN......... |
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Black Rain Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 60California, USA |
You've got a really great style of writing, i love the poem. ------------------ |
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Olga Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152Brooklyn, NY, USA |
I LOVE this poem. Im guessin that dis was about ur best friend or an Ex boyfriend. As I read da poem I know wut ur feelin, keep it up. |
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Olga Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152Brooklyn, NY, USA |
sorry bout that I mean ex girlfriend. |
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