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Robert
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since 1999-07-09
Posts 20
sunrise,fl,usa
0 posted 1999-07-24 08:08 PM

Dreaming all through my head
my head is caving in
YOU'VE GOT ME GOING CRAZY
GOING CRAZY
GOING CRAZY
LIKE A STAR WE ALL FALL
EVIL MIND? I MIGHT LIKE IT
I CAN TAKE THE PAIN
BUT IT PULLS ME IN
YOU KNOW I'M THE LEADER OF ALL MY SIN
BUT, I CONTROL ME.
DO YOU CONTROL ME?
YOU CAN'T TELL ME WHAT TO DO
(I DO IT ANYWAY)
I JUST FOLLOWED YOU,
THROUGH AND THROUGH
BUT, YOU'LL NEVER TAKE ME DOWN AGAIN
YOU'LL NEVER TAKE ME DOWN.
CAUSE I DON'T EVER WANT TO FEEL THAT WAY AGAIN.........
© Copyright 1999 Robert - All Rights Reserved
Black Rain
Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 60
California, USA
1 posted 1999-07-24 09:53 PM

You've got a really great style of writing, i love the poem.

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Olga
Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA
2 posted 1999-07-26 11:38 PM

I LOVE this poem. Im guessin that dis was about ur best friend or an Ex boyfriend. As I read da poem I know wut ur feelin, keep it up.
Olga
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since 1999-07-26
Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA
3 posted 1999-07-26 11:39 PM

sorry bout that I mean ex girlfriend.
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