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since 1999-07-12
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0 posted 1999-07-19 03:52 AM

i Don't know if you have any idea of
how sorry i am for everything
I've done to you
All the hurt and paini put you through
It wasn't fair on me but most of all on you

I should have known how much i was killing you
I couldn't see it although it was staring at me

Until realise it until you were gone
That i suddenly reliased all along
how much i needed you
Needed and longed for everything about you

The way that whenever i was feeling down
YOur smile and warm touch cured me
When i cried you were there
By my side kissing them away

Throughout all of this
you have stayed holding me in your arms
While i have pushed you away, lied and neglected you

You are everything to me, my life
My only love,
you mean more to me than i ever knew

I regret what happened and all i can say now
Please Forgive me,
i promise it will never happen again

I love you with every beat of my heart
I hope that between us
our love shall never part
Forever we will remain
beneath the stars
Mesmirized in each others arms


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Junior Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 20

1 posted 1999-07-19 04:01 AM

Great poem. It captures the feeling of hurt in a loving relationship and gives hope fer healing. Many relationships end this way but many survive and ur poem captures all the emtiona involved keep up the good writin.
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since 1999-07-26
Posts 28
2 posted 1999-07-26 11:37 PM

this is a very good poem, it shows your deep feelings and shows how hurt people become, when they lose a part of them. i love your work, its really touching


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