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Melis005 New Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 2Falmouth, Massachusetts, USA |
Sea's Sonnet From bluff above I hear the sea call out "I feel and know you see, we are the same" But from above I am filled with great doubt It's squall, "I know your heart, your soul, your name" The need to hear its message draws me near What wisdom can the sea so deep impart And can it see within me crystal clear? How does it know my soul, my name, my heart? Then suddenly I feel the angry waves The undertow- the anchor of my life The gentle lapping that my psyche craves Acknowledgement now nullifies my strife I did not realize how I could be I stand here knowing now I am the sea [This message has been edited by Melis005 (edited 07-23-99).] |
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Black Rain Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 60California, USA |
Great poem, I loved it. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Beautiful, I really love this! Great!  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter |
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Ron
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669Michigan, US |
This is lovely! You've successfully captured the duality of the ocean, and you've done it in a very beautiful (and enduring) format. |
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