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Teen Poetry #1

i don't have a father

Addie Anne
Junior Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 46
norman, oklahoma- usa

0 posted 1999-07-23 08:02 PM

i have no father,
ever since i tried to die
i've been a failure.
his shining star shines no more
i'm a whore now,
not really, but in his eye's i am.
daddy had disowned me,
ever since i questioned his god
ever since i argued his lies.
his child is not his child anymore
i'm a sinner now,
not really, but to his god i am.
all i have now is a burden upon myself
all i have is myself,
i don't have a father,
he has a new baby boy to fill his dreams
i don't mean a thing
i haven't fullfilled what he wanted me to be
so he disowned me.
i don't have a father antmore.

*addie anne

Black Rain
Member

since 1999-07-19

Posts 60
California, USA

1 posted 1999-07-24 10:04 PM

How sad! I can completely relate to this. Great work.....you have some talent!

Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

2 posted 1999-07-25 01:12 AM

That poem makes me think of my relationship with my father....my dads a religious jew,and i belive all that he belives in is B.S.,He disowned my olderbrother,and my sister...but it isnt my turn yet

Addie Anne
Junior Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 46
norman, oklahoma- usa

3 posted 1999-07-25 11:46 AM

thank you both,
it means a lot.

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