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Teen Poetry #1

I Remember When...

nikki1421
Junior Member

since 1999-07-15

Posts 15

0 posted 1999-07-22 11:49 AM

I remember when I saw you I just knew,
I knew that you were the one,
The one I wanted to be with,
Be with every day,
Every day and every night,
Every night you said it,
Said that you'd be true,
You'd be true and I love you,
I love you but you dont love me,
Me I won't cry or sobb,
Sobb no way,
No way because I remember when.

[This message has been edited by nikki1421 (edited 07-28-99).]

cuteangel3
New Member

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2

1 posted 1999-07-25 01:00 PM

I liked how you structured the sentences.

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