|Teen Poetry #1|
since 1999-07-18Posts 28
West Columbia, South Carolina 29170
How can I explain
How much I want to be with you?
There's a twisting pain
That I feel if I don't see you soon.
I think I'm in love
But someone else loves you, too
I don't know what I should do--
Hide it from her and not be true?
How can I stab her in the back
I know how much she loves you
But every time we're together
I begin to think I love you.
Why is life so hard for me?
So love is blind, but how can't she see
How much I want you
To be with me?
I can't do this to my girl
Friends are said to be more
Important than love
And I used to agree, before.
Now I know the feeling is mutual
And I don't think I can decide--
Stab my girl in the back
Or ignore the love between you and I?
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since 1999-07-18Posts 18
that is dope! (real good)
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since 1999-07-20Posts 4
Ashley... You have a great amount of talent, I have read all of your works on these pages... you have a great ability to express your feelings.. I relate to a lot of your work... Great Job
"For Every Love Letter That Is Written, There Is Another One Burnt"
since 1999-07-19Posts 60
I can totally relate to this poem, as to many of your others. Its very good, and I can't wait to hear some more.
"Each of us are angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other."
- Luciano de Crescenzo
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