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murf1_00
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since 1999-07-19
Posts 20


0 posted 1999-07-20 06:09 PM


Lifes like a dark tunnel with only love to light the way
And in everyones tunnel their's a light
For many years I've gone down that tunnel with no light
Yet now my light is shining bright
Bright as the sun
Yellow as a sunflower
And what do i see around me?
A life of enjoyment
A life with its ups and downs
A life with someone whom I care for deeply
You my dear Liz
You are my light and love
I can see the way
No longer will my tunnel be dark as long as I have you
Say youll never leave always be my light and way

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Ashley2405
Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 28
West Columbia, South Carolina 29170
1 posted 1999-07-20 09:15 PM


Our poems are very similar. We both have that need to be loved, well at least i do. this is a really great poem.

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