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since 1999-06-29
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0 posted 1999-07-18 11:27 PM

A window to the soul
Is what I desire
An open


Way into my heart.

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Acid Angel
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 17
Austin, TX, US
1 posted 1999-07-25 08:24 PM

I liked it very much, its good and expressive, short, and to the point.

Sweet T
since 1999-06-14
Posts 64
mesa, arizona maricopa
2 posted 1999-07-26 02:27 PM

Show me the Way
Princess Lily
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149
3 posted 1999-07-29 12:56 PM

Wonderful.If you were looking for a title:Window to the soul(perhaps)

We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe

*A rose is a rose it withers and long as you keep it the memories stay alive*

Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 31
Kingston Springs,Tn.,U.S.
4 posted 1999-07-29 01:27 AM

Maybe "Open desire" would work. I really like your poem.
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
5 posted 1999-07-29 05:03 PM

Beatiful...I like the suggestions for names already given, but choose something that you think fits well. What is your general feeling? How does it make you feel? Thats how I choose some of my titles, it may or may not help you. Anyway, good job!

*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks

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