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since 1999-07-18
Posts 21
Philadelphia, PA USA

0 posted 1999-07-18 07:31 PM

I feel for You

Nothing can explain, the way I feel for you,
Although I try,I still don’t know what to do.
With each day, that passes long,
My feelings for you, only grow strong.
What can I say, what can I do,
When all I ever think about now, is you.
My feelings for you is not a myth,
For you are the first girl, who’s personality I fell in love with.
Laying at night, all alone,
I called you up, and heard your voice over the phone.
With feelings and honesty, all so true,
You specifically said, the things you needed for you.
After I heard your words, back then,
I couldn’t help, but want to hear it again.
That night I started to think, like I never did before,
Am I the right guy for you?, Or do you deserve more?
Should I keep persuing you, Or should I walk out the door?
Answers to these questions, I will never know,
Till that day, when you let your heart go.
But now I’ll wait as long as it takes,
I just hope it’s not too long,cuz too much is at stake.
If you are feeling insecure about the way I feel,
All I can say is that I know it’s real.
I hope by now you know what you mean to me,
Cuz the way you are making me feel right now, is just crazy.
In my heart, deep down inside,
These words are feelings I just can’t hide.
So I end this poem, hoping you are feeling alright,
And just like Selena, I’ll be dreaming of you tonight.

(Live, Love,& Let Love)


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Junior Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 10

1 posted 1999-07-19 05:33 PM

I can relate fully to this poem. It speaks of my own life. Its a good poem.
New Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 7
Belton, MO U.S.A.
2 posted 1999-07-20 03:51 AM

Great poem. I loved it!
since 1999-07-19
Posts 55
Danville Va. 24540
3 posted 1999-07-21 06:12 PM

really really liked it....a lot!!
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