Teen Poetry #1 |
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swan Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 58california, usa |
I've never had anyone give me a reason to believe that hearts wern't made to be broken and i've never been in love at all. I've never had someone like me for who i am it's not that i don't respect myself. I'm just afraid, too afraid to be alone. Not one of my romantic fantisies have actually happened and i've never taken a vacation from the clouds. But the more dreams i have the better the chance that one minght come true and the better the chance that they will all be broken.But if there was ever anyone out there who will love me for what i am now, I promise i'd give him my life. |
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Nuriphnos Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 21Philadelphia, PA USA |
Hi Kate, I really like your poem. I think i can relate to it in a way. You want someone to luv u for who u are, not what they want you to be. Sometimes kate, the best things are worth the wait. I know u are some1 special, and if u haven't found the one yet, dont dispair, cuz as sure as the sun will rise the next day, there is some1 out there L.L.L.L>Cole P.S. To reply to a posting go to the bottom of the posting and click "post a reply" |
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Ashley2405 Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 28West Columbia, South Carolina 29170 |
that was a really great poem. i used to feel the same way. i was always down on myself cuz i felt like i could never be loved. and one of my friends always used to tell me, good things come to those who wait. well, it's very true. i have found the best thing in my life after waiting my whole life. you will find someone special, too. ------------------ *})i({*Ash*})i({* |
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Ashley2405 Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 28West Columbia, South Carolina 29170 |
that was a really great poem. i used to feel the same way. i was always down on myself cuz i felt like i could never be loved. and one of my friends always used to tell me, good things come to those who wait. well, it's very true. i have found the best thing in my life after waiting my whole life. you will find someone special, too. ------------------ *})i({*Ash*})i({* |
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Ashley2405 Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 28West Columbia, South Carolina 29170 |
oops sorry bout that!! ------------------ *})i({*Ash*})i({* |
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Black Rain Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 60California, USA |
Yes Kate, that was a very good poem, and guess what? you were right, i was playing along, it was me. |
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swan Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 58california, usa |
thanks for responding everyone. this poen isn't really about my personel experience but it's nice to know that you care anyway!thanks again! black rain your a goober! Swan |
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swan Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 58california, usa |
thanks for responding everyone. this poen isn't really about my personel experience but it's nice to know that you care anyway!thanks again! black rain your a goober! Swan |
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Rita Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 55Danville Va. 24540 |
good poem......shows a lot of feeling |
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