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Black Rain
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since 1999-07-19
Posts 60
California, USA

0 posted 1999-07-20 03:34 PM


I told him I had a secret, one that I wanted to share.
I told him that I loved him, I told him that I care.
I told him how I felt, and what I've wanted to say.
As soon as he heard the truth, he didn't want to stay.
He left me feeling depressed, he didn't even call.
I guess we can't be friends, it was me or not at all.
He took the easy way out, and left me all alone.
I wanted to know how he felt, he could've picked up a phone.
I know he doesn't love me now, all he did was lie.
But despite all that he's put me through, I know I'll love him til I die.

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Rita
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since 1999-07-19
Posts 55
Danville Va. 24540
1 posted 1999-07-21 06:17 PM


honey, i know how you feel.....yo show a lot of feeling...good job...like it
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