Teen Poetry #1 |
A dear friend I lost |
HoTcHiK942 New Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 3Spirit Lake, ID, USA |
Where is this place I'm at? In my yard I sat, hearing things I don't want to hear, I can feel something bad is near. I get up and walk inside, a scream and slam I hear outside, I run outside right near the road, I hear a gun shot explode. There was a guy laying near, I see a gun by his ear. I turn him over to see, that it was my best friend Lee! I laid there and wept, right near him is where I slept, the next morning I realize, That I lost a dear friend. Dedicated to my dearest friend: Lee perce may he rest in peace! Writen by your friend: Becky Porter |
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chuckles New Member
since 2003-07-03
Posts 1Irving, Tx |
I like your poem.I lost a dear friend in May she was hit by a train. and i feel like she is still here but then i realize that she is gone. No matter what i go thru every day i know that she is looking down on me and smiling. i think your friend is doing the same. just always remember that they are looking down taking care of you. |
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Why Junior Member
since 2003-09-26
Posts 32Middle of nowhere |
That was an amazing poem. It brought a tear to my eye. Very beautiful. Keep it up |
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sweetkiss New Member
since 2003-11-18
Posts 3Me, USA |
I'm sorry for your loss.. It sounds like a really hard time and this poem really makes u feel this pain |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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