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Teen Poetry #1

I'll Give you Love

LUCAS
New Member

since 1999-08-31

Posts 1
Mt, Vernon, IA

0 posted 1999-08-31 05:39 PM

I'll give you love,
The things you want,
I would do anything for you.

Sitting at home on another nigh,
I wish you were here so i could hold you tight,
Feeling my heart because I'm all alone,
why cant you see how much I want you so?.

Thinking of ways I can win your heart,
but im so confused i dont know where to start.
visions of love forever in my mind,
i can't wait to that day whe i can say that thought is mine.
Because i would do anything for you.
"Yes I would"

baby there is nothing in this world that i wouldnt do.

What can I do to prove that i ant your love.
what would it take because i wont give up.
because deep inside my heart i want your love.So if there ever comes a time when its true i can call you mine, just call out my name.
Now i swear i would do anything for you.

quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

1 posted 2002-11-01 03:21 AM

powerful. this was a good write, and i wanted you to know that i read it.

i hate seeing zeros next to poems that people worked so hard on.

/jen/

what if they gave a war, and nobody came...

jarrett
Member

since 2006-05-10

Posts 72
Ut, USA

2 posted 2006-06-28 02:46 PM

That was a wonderful poem thanks for sharing it.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-11-13 07:54 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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