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The dark corner of my mind
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The dark corner of my mind |
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Krystal Klear New Member
since 1999-06-16
Posts 7Phoenix Arizona USA |
The things I felt for you, Were so special and so new. I thought it would last forever, Shows how little I knew. So now from all the pain I've endured from people like you... I have a special place to put things I know about you. You see, in my mind, I've made this place... Hardly anybody knows. But there are a few special people that get to go... These people have hurt me ways, That nobody should know. Yet they think it's funny to play with my emotions. And so these people are put in thise place, To never be thought of again. But sometimes someone escapes... The dark place..... And brings the memories abck to me. You see, right now I've let someone escape. Because I know I love him But I don't want to feel pain. And I let him escape, The dark corner of my mind. |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
i really hate to see so many zeros.  but this was a good write filled with lots of emotion. and i just wanted you to know that somebody read it.  /jen/ what if they gave a war, and nobody came... |
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SixtiesChick03 Junior Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 49NV |
I totally loved this poem...it hit really close to home with me right now. I am lookin forward to reading more of your poems. GREAT JOB! |
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sweetkiss New Member
since 2003-11-18
Posts 3Me, USA |
I really loved this poem.. reminds me of how I feel sometimes.. but all those people in the dark corners just make u a stronger person.. ~*~April~*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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