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Jimmy Junior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 42Oak Grove |
I wish I could take back all the times a made a big mistake, that made times of good to times when we would break. I wish I could explain to you how much I regret one, You are my everything, my earth, my moon, my sun. I know that know matter if this feeling is never returned, I want you to know I Love You even if I get burned. I don't know how else to say this thing I just have to get it out, I wish I could take back cheating on you and thats with out a doubt. It hurts me to hear you say that we can't get back together, but I understand that I let you down, I was with another. It didn't last that long with Amanda, just one week, Thats long enough to ruin us, now it's hard to sleep. I can't tell you I'm sorry enough for how I did you bad. I now know whats it's like to be the one thats sad. Even though I have no chance to show what I say is true, Just want you to know Forever, I Love You! I will always love you |
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Poetrychick New Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 2USA |
I really liked your poem. I feel bad for your experience, a friend of mine went through the same thing. I feel lucky to never have been in that situation; however, I have been in a similar situation. I know life will never be the same. However that poem moved me. I encourage you to keep writing. You have a gift. |
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