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heaven_0401 Junior Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 19Australia |
I am lost So utterly lost wihtin of you The mess of me Is tangled far too deep inside you Casting a web of hate, pain and lies Shadowing Love happiness and honesty So many emotions Choke me inside Building the destruction Between you and I Infactuation, Obsession and longing Tear Away As a long hurtful stabbing Anchores my crying heart Will you ever be able to reach me? Or will i forever dorown in the deep sea The unforgiving sea of misery Will you be able to untangle The sad depressed and lonely me Abstracting nothinless Reflecting more than everything Shinings of love Hide the clouds of hate As happiness bellows As sadness escapes Togetherness indents lonliness A piece of you Is entwined to a piece of me |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
With a little work on meter, I think you might want to try this one in Open. ------------------ Being paranoid is the biggest reason I'm still around to practice my paranoia. DreamEvil© |
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