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nikki1421
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since 1999-07-15
Posts 15


0 posted 1999-07-16 11:10 AM


I lie awake
Thinking about you
Wondering where you are
Then I wish upon a star
That I was there too.

I find myself daydreaming all the time
Wishing that you were still mine
Hoping it would be the same again.

Then it all becomes so clear
You were always distant and never near
She has your heart now and she had it then
Now I realize that what we had was...
JUST A GAME OF PRETEND.


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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-07-16 11:28 AM


Well done, dear.

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Being paranoid is the biggest reason I'm still around to practice my paranoia.
DreamEvil©


Cutie
Junior Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 19
Falmouth MA
2 posted 1999-07-16 02:06 PM


thanks dream evil
Cutie
Junior Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 19
Falmouth MA
3 posted 1999-07-16 02:07 PM


thanks dream evil
Cutie
Junior Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 19
Falmouth MA
4 posted 1999-07-18 09:50 AM


Sorry Nikki
I didn't mean to post those two replies. Good poem though.
Cutie


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