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orpheus
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since 1999-07-10
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Portugal

0 posted 1999-07-12 01:08 AM


His lips are there
Fainting in her mouth
Drowning
They are joining two pieces of a whole
They are stealing each other's soul

© Copyright 1999 orpheus - All Rights Reserved
Joshua
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since 1999-07-08
Posts 43
phoenix,az,usa
1 posted 1999-07-12 01:13 AM


It's as if i was envolved in the kiss!
short but sweet
Thank you!

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"The poet is the priest of the invisable." *Wallace Stevens*
"I don't write poetry for me or about my experiences, I rely on others for that. I write poetry for others." *Me*



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