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Joshua
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since 1999-07-08
Posts 43
phoenix,az,usa

0 posted 1999-07-12 01:10 AM


On that sweet summer's eve
I was out with my friends
And you with yours
You glanced my way and our eyes met
The spectacular glicen in your eye
Atracted me to go over.
My friends said you weren't as pretty as The rest of your clique
I disagreed and said there was more than Meets the eye
Days later i met your brother
Whom has grown up knowing me
With out meeting me
We talk all the time
But seldom see each other
With out even realizing it
I've fallen into love with you
You may not know it
And you may not care
But I'd like you to know
I'll always be there
The love i feel for you
Is not the same
As one would feel for a wife
But the love of a friend for life!


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"Poetry is an orphan of scilence. The words never quite equal the experiece behind them." *Charles Simic*

"The poet is the priest of the invisable." *Wallace Stevens*
"I don't write poetry for me or about my experiences, I rely on others for that. I write poetry for others." *Me*



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Joshua
Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 43
phoenix,az,usa
1 posted 1999-07-12 01:17 AM


This is a rare poem, it's actually about me and someone. (Jenni)
take it in, its rare.

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"Poetry is an orphan of scilence. The words never quite equal the experiece behind them." *Charles Simic*

"The poet is the priest of the invisable." *Wallace Stevens*
"I don't write poetry for me or about my experiences, I rely on others for that. I write poetry for others." *Me*




[This message has been edited by Joshua (edited 07-12-99).]

Charlie
Junior Member
since 1999-07-09
Posts 11
australia
2 posted 1999-07-12 02:27 AM


In the words of Austin Powers Groove baby yeah

I loved it and its true that there is more than what meets the eye

By the way thanks heaps for your comment before

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lov' charlotte (or charlie)

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