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Ashlie693
Junior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 25

0 posted 1999-07-08 02:04 AM

Best Friends Forever
We always would say
Those words echo in my head
And I see where we are today

You neglected the trust
Broke the bond that we had
Made me feel second best
Unappreciated, and sad

I didnt want to accept it
That we were growing apart
Then one day it hit me
And it broke my heart

Never do we know
How the words we speak can hurt
The heartless words you spoke
Made me feel like worthless dirt

Will time heal this pain
I really dont know
But for know Id like to let you know
Im going to take it slow

I dont care to see you right now
Or talk on the phone
Maybe I need to see
What its like to face life alone

The trust here is gone
When will it return
Maybe never, I fear
But maybe this is how we learn

A piece of my heart is broken
And it needs time to mend
The only thing left to be said today
Is goodbye, my friend

Delilah
Junior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 36
The Wonderful America

1 posted 1999-07-08 02:05 AM

Beautiful. I can relate.

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

2 posted 1999-07-08 02:11 AM

I can tell you, time does heal those wounds..I've been through it 3 times. Wonderful job at expressing the pain of loosing a friend.

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*Krista Knutson*

roxy8365
Junior Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 27
e.falmouth MA usa

3 posted 1999-07-08 09:00 AM

good job, ashlie!its really sad, but i can relate.

Darm31
Junior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 22
westminster ca usa

4 posted 1999-07-09 02:20 AM

sometimes I cry when i think about loosing my friends...but everything and anything can happen..it's all for a reason, what a unique way to show that u still love that friend u once had but u can't take them back just yet.

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Charlie
Junior Member

since 1999-07-09

Posts 11
australia

5 posted 1999-07-11 09:44 PM

That is a really good poem i would like to say i hope you keep writting coz they are RAD

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lov' charlotte (or charlie)

Aprender
Junior Member

since 1999-06-22

Posts 40
Rohill, NJ, USA

6 posted 1999-07-11 11:22 PM

wow....i felt the way when i lost my best friend...in fact i posted a similar poem about it not too long ago!! good work

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