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Gedanken
Junior Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 16
New york

0 posted 1999-07-11 12:24 PM



As I look out upon the sun setting cast over the water

I feel a cool breeze rush across my skin,

As I stare at the reflection of nature in the dark lake

A thought comes to me, it sends chills down my body

It is so warm and comforting yet so distant

A soft voice and an innocent laugh plays aloud in my head

The thought intensifies, so confusing and scarry yet so clear and soothing,

Images flash, sounds play, thoughts collide inside my head

It feels as a dream running wild in the night

But in time the realization comes-----

It is was the thought of you.


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I say to all who listens, we'll never win!!

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LoveStruck
New Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 9
Southwest Missouri, USA
1 posted 1999-07-11 12:44 PM


huh? i don't get it. you gave away the end in the title

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[This message has been edited by LoveStruck (edited 07-11-99).]

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