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Emmarusell
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 4
Juarez, Chihuahua, Mexico.

0 posted 1999-06-16 01:53 PM


Pasa un dia más,
cada minuto es un infierno.
Sigo esperando una llamada que no llega,
sigo creyenedo que aún volveras.

Eras tan mío que no puedo creerlo aún,
mi mente se atormenta con lo que pudo ser,
y el corazón duele tanto...

No encuentro la forma de decirte adiós,
de convencerme que no volveras,
mi corazón no quiere aceptarlo,
porque nunca nos dijimos adiós...

Me sacaste de tú vida, fue tan fácil para ti,
desgraciadamente no me dijiste como sacarte a ti.
Si tan solo pudiera convencer a mi corazón de que ya no volveras, que no debo esperarte aunque siempre te amare...

Cómo decirte adiós?, Cómo si duele tanto?, Cómo decirte adiós, cuando te amo tanto?


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Nimrod the Hunter
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since 1999-06-10
Posts 60

1 posted 1999-06-16 02:04 PM


Help! If you can, can you translate it for me please? Or can somebody else? Emmarusell, you are sooooo clever! I'm halfway learning Portuguese. *hehe*

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Nimrod the Hunter

Emmarusell
New Member
since 1999-06-16
Posts 4
Juarez, Chihuahua, Mexico.
2 posted 1999-06-16 05:12 PM


Hi, I'm from Mexico, and I speak spanish, but I'm going to try to translate it in English.

I can't find a way to say goodbye.

Another day,
every minute it's like hell.
I'm still waiting for you to call,
I'm still believing that you're coming back.

You were so mine that I can't believe it,
my mind torture herself thinking of what would it be.
And the heart aches a lot.

I can't find a way to say goodbye,
to realize that you aren't coming back,
my heart don't want to accept it,
because we never said goodbye.

You get me out of your life, it was so easy for you, unfortunately, you didn't tell me how to do the same.
If I could only convince my heart to let you go,
that you aren't coming back,
that I shouldn't wait for you,
even if I'll always love you.

How can I say goodbye? How if it hurts so much?
How do I say goodbye, when I love you so much?

[This message has been edited by Emmarusell (edited 06-18-99).]

Nimrod the Hunter
Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 60

3 posted 1999-06-16 05:46 PM


That is a very beautiful translation. I knew you were speaking Spanish. A friend from Brazil has been teaching me Portuguese, which obviously is closely related to Spanish. My friend told me once that his poems written in Portuguese doesn't sound as beautiful in English as it does in Portuguese, so it would be better if I learned Portuguese before I read his poems.

I think that getting to know how people from other countries like to express words in poems is more than worth the effort.

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Nimrod the Hunter

[This message has been edited by Nimrod the Hunter (edited 06-16-99).]

Augchic711
Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 80
O'Fallon, IL, USA
4 posted 1999-06-19 01:36 AM


Yo estoy muy alegre que tu escribes esta poema. Es muy bueno para mi corazon! Me siento el mismo, mi ultimo novio es el mismo tan este persona!!! Gracias para tu poema. Mi mejor amiga y yo me gustan tu poema! Gracias y buen suerte en el futuro!

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Emmarusell
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 4
Juarez, Chihuahua, Mexico.
5 posted 1999-06-20 12:25 PM


Thank you very much for your words about my poem, In this moment of my life It really helped me,I just hope that one day, my boyfriend, well, exboyfriend, he could read this poem, and tell me how to say goodbye, cause I still don't know how to do it, cause I really don't want to do it, but I have to let him go, cause I have to understand that people change, I want him to be happy, and it's hard to say, but I want him to live the life he loves, and love the life he lives, I love him so much, so I'm willing to let him go. Right now, I'm trying to continue, just with the memories of the person that I used to think will love me forever, well, nothing it's forever, so I hope that this pain someday will go away.
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