Teen Poetry #1 |
Fantasy Glade |
Dusk Treader
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Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
The glade of fantasy Where the mind’s fruit is fleshed Dreams wander the sunny land White unicorns prance upon the green Golden spiraled horns grace their head Flowing mane of silver, sparkling Faeries dance in the night Earthbound stars, dancing there Tiny voices singing wordlessly Dragons stretching leather pinions Fire glowing in their soulful eyes Knowledge rolling off rough tongues All I see is the stuff of dreams Fantasy and mortal whim The work of a lonely mind ------------------ *Dusk Treader* pacing the path between dark and light. |
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Alwye
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I see that you are another that shares a similar dream to mine....exquisitely written. I love it! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* |
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Dusk Treader
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I thank you for your kind words . I don't think this poem is much when compared to your literary masterpieces. Your poems paint a vivid picture on the canvas of my mind, which I'm sure my rather weak attept does not. ------------------ *Dusk Treader* pacing the path between dark and light. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I think it definitely was good. Thanks for all the comments on my work, also. Comments like yours inspire me to write more and more. Thank you. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* |
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