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Teen Poetry #1

Fantasy Glade

Dusk Treader

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since 1999-06-18

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St. Paul, MN

0 posted 1999-06-19 04:05 AM

The glade of fantasy
Where the mind’s fruit is fleshed
Dreams wander the sunny land

White unicorns prance upon the green
Golden spiraled horns grace their head
Flowing mane of silver, sparkling

Faeries dance in the night
Earthbound stars, dancing there
Tiny voices singing wordlessly

Dragons stretching leather pinions
Fire glowing in their soulful eyes
Knowledge rolling off rough tongues

All I see is the stuff of dreams
Fantasy and mortal whim
The work of a lonely mind

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*Dusk Treader* pacing the path between dark and light.

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-06-19 01:40 PM

I see that you are another that shares a similar dream to mine....exquisitely written. I love it!

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*Krista Knutson*

Dusk Treader

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since 1999-06-18

Posts 1187
St. Paul, MN

2 posted 1999-06-19 02:38 PM

I thank you for your kind words

. I don't think this poem is much when compared to your literary masterpieces. Your poems paint a vivid picture on the canvas of my mind, which I'm sure my rather weak attept does not.

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*Dusk Treader* pacing the path between dark and light.

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

3 posted 1999-06-19 08:11 PM

I think it definitely was good.

Thanks for all the comments on my work, also. Comments like yours inspire me to write more and more. Thank you.

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*Krista Knutson*

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