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Teen Poetry #1

Prisoner of the Heart

invertigo18
Member

since 1999-06-14

Posts 53
Prairieville, LA., USA

0 posted 1999-06-15 03:55 PM

Do you love me like I love you?
Let us do what lovers do.
Let us drink of the Cupid kiss.
And hang in one another's bliss.
Soaring so unbelieveably high
into one another's eyes.

On you I float just like a cloud.
You're the rain I'm the ground.
In you I find the warmest shroud.
You make this world not so loud.
But now you're gone and now I see
A painful bite, reality.
And I just wish that you could free
This love inside of me.
I'm a prisoner of the heart.
From the start.
A prisoner of the heart.

If your love could only stay
Just for one more blessed day
I wouldn't let you get away
I'd beg and plead for you to stay.
Bound from the moment in shackles and chains.
Hypnotized by all my pain.
You would forever remain
A prisoner of the heart.

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Luke Cakalic

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-06-17 01:22 AM

Wonderfully written.

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*Krista Knutson*

Marie
New Member

since 1999-06-17

Posts 6
Stafford,TX,United States

2 posted 1999-06-17 11:34 AM

I love your poem.

Augchic711
Member

since 1999-06-17

Posts 80
O'Fallon, IL, USA

3 posted 1999-06-19 01:17 AM

Luke~
I enjoyed our poem and think that you have such talent! I look forward to reading more of your poems and you should post this in open poetry forum everyone there would like it as well!

*******Augchic711*******

Whau2251
Junior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 17
Hanford,California,U.S.A.

4 posted 1999-06-20 12:56 PM

Beautiful. Just plain wonderful. You really do have talent.

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