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Teen Poetry #1

An Unguided Love

ConderE
Junior Member

since 1999-08-14

Posts 29
TX, USA

0 posted 1999-10-01 12:15 PM

An Unguided Love

I wander through the dark
Trying to make a spark
That may turn into a fire
A Desire
For someone
That will come into my life
And make it worthwhile

She has come
And quick as a flash
Stole my heart
But it longed for another
One that was everything that I ever dreamed.

But both have a place in my heart
I can’t choose one without my world falling apart.
But I was too quick.
And didn’t follow my heart

The one that I long
Is like a beautiful song
She is always on my mind
And I wish that I had taken the time
To realize that you are my one, my dream

ConderE
Junior Member

since 1999-08-14

Posts 29
TX, USA

1 posted 1999-10-02 01:01 AM

If you read this poem, please post your comments, or e-mail me at [email protected]

theKUTEone
New Member

since 2000-06-17

Posts 4

2 posted 2000-06-18 04:16 PM

What a beautiful poem! You have put into words, how I feel, but with guys not girls, hehe! it's good to know that i'm not the only like that.=Þ
LoveAlwayz~~theKUTEone~~

Phoebee
Junior Member

since 2000-07-09

Posts 42
Peoria, AZ

3 posted 2000-07-09 07:56 PM

That's a great poem. Love is a mysterious thing.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-11-13 07:47 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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